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Please God

Is anybody there?
Does anybody care?

I see problems arising for our precious creatures
Our partners on the earth.
Please, God, help us! People are turning…cold
Cruel
Heartless!

I have cried so many tears, and not one single drop
Has helped to save them.

They are just as important as humans

Does anybody care?
Is anybody there?
Does anybody see….
What I see?

Lord, they need guidance…
They need our protection,
Please, God.
Please.

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