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In the Realm Of Make-Believe

When magic seems so far,
And pain has trembled near.
Lose yourself for one sweet glance
And you will see it's clear

For just one wish upon a star
Dreams will wisk you away
Become a princess, find true love
Find the color in this world of grey.

Join the circle of life,
In a revelry of celebration.
Let your voice be heard
From the oceans to the mountains!

Just follow your heart
And become the hero,
You could save the day,
To find the voice inside your soul.

Who knows in the realm of magic
What possibilities might you see
So I ask you one last question
Tell me, do you believe?



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  • StarLover
    February 17
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    Very well written I think you should leave it the way it is! xoxo Miranda