Bobby Shafto’s gone to sea
Silver buckles at his knee.
Just where could that little dog be?
All the words swirl in my head
As I tuck you into bed.
I’ve lost count of what I’ve read!
Goodnight now my little one
Just one more as day is done…
A little song, gone the sun.
A contest entry
- Your Favorite Nursery Rhyme by Tqop.
650 points, ended February 27, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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I like the rhymes. It sounds like a song. It's a really happy poem.
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very sweetly writen
i really enjoyed this and i'm abt the same age as you are. i think the 2d line of the third stanza is a bit awkward, but, i may just be missing something. i like that you kept a consistent rhyme scheme and a consistent meter. the picks on the sides really look lovely also.
who's bobby shafto?
regards
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Good Work!
Innovative
Creative
Nice
And
Flows
Well....
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