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Flutter Flutter Butterfly

Flutter, flutter butterfly
Flit from flower to flower
Let your dancing please my eye
for hour after hour

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  • Ryan79
    February 23, 2009
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    Beautifully, short. I love the rhythy and rhyme. Good job.


  • BellaAmare
    February 17, 2009

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    Nice work!

    I love this poem. It's so cute.
    All that's missing is the music.
    I love it.

    Nice job.
    I love the rhyming and how it flowed.

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