As silence creeps up
And bitterness falls
The young girl
With the blond flowing hair
Cries out for her ex-lover
Through the moonlit terrace
The girl walks to the edge
She takes one leap of faith
And rests her head
Knowing this was only a dream
A contest entry
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1000 points, ended November 23, 1039 entries
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Comments
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i love how you build up suspence with the leap of faith and then leave the reader to their own conclusion it was such a sudden transition between those 2 lines that it forces the reader 2 reread...i like it
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This was sad and painful, but it also brought out a hidden hope. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.
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cool write. thanks for entering. Good luck!
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