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First Day of the Rest of Our Life

"You are my love my world my everything" -Roger
"You make me melt and make my heart sing" -Mindie
"'Together our love is true and pure" -Roger
"I' know there is nothing your smile couldnt cure" -Mindie
"Your eyes and the warm feel of your touch" - Roger
"Show that you love me so very much" -Mindie
"When you look at me I see the sparkle in your eye" -Roger
"At the end of the isle you wait and straighten your tie" -Mindie
"You look so beautiful in your white flowing dress" - Roger
"I still remember the day you said yes" -Mindie
"I looked in your eyes and grabbed your hand" -Roger
"Slipped on your shimmering wedding band" -Mindie
"I stand  before you now and say I do" -Roger
"Saying our vows then waiting for our que" -Mindie
"I kiss your lips as of now your my wife" - Roger
"This is the first day of the rest of our life" - Mindie

Author notes

He started off with a text saying the first line of this poem and i said the second and so on and on

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  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    February 16

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    Beautiful colaboration between you and your husband
    Loving words spoken from each other's heart
    The rhyme and flow is great as well
    Take care,
    Many blessings
    David