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My Sweetling, My Love, My Josh

Your eyes are like mirrors made of green sea glass
Your voice is like silk sliding over my bare skin
Your skin is as soft as a newly bloomed rose
Your lips are luscious as candy and as powerful as a panther

Your graceful as a dancer while as powerful as a ninja
When I am with you I feel safe and loved
You are the reason I have succeeded as much as I have
When you are around I know that I am safe

You are the love of my life and only one I want
There wouldn’t be any reason that I would want to lose you
For I will fight to keep you till my heart stops and my soul dies
You are the only person I will ever

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this was part of a v-day present for my love

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