Nightmares whispering deadly
thoughts, echoing, reminding
of a tragic day.
Steal my heart,
rip it up.
Stomp, crash, burn.
Give me something else
to write about.
Continuous tears splash
against blank paper;
the future blurred,
but makes a interesting
plot line
Author notes
Prompt: "Lonliness creates dreams"
In a list
A contest entry
- 40 Words by Sandra R Reynolds.
400 points, ended February 17, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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amazing piece. 2nd stanza was the best. Especially; "Give me something else
to write about." I've been having writers block lately :/
-Raven
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I really enjoyed reading this one; it jumped out at me for some reason.
Hope to see more of your poetry soon.
Thanks for sharing.
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"Steal my heart, rip it up."
"Continuous tears splash
against blank paper;
the future blurred,
but makes a interesting
plot line"
beautifully written.
'nuff said. :3 -
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Thank you =]
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OHHH.. this is gorgeous. beautiful, touching & oozing with heartache. congrats on the trophy
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BANDITS UNITED!
This a a very intense and touching poem. Very well crafted with wonderfu imagery...
Love & Light
Debbera
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I can feel the intensity this piece brings to the table
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Thank you for your comment ^^
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you're welcome
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Congratulations on the Bronze Trophy sweetie.. Mommy is so proud of you.. I love the poem in its entirety, but my fav part is the last stanza..
this is such a deep & intense poem to me.. one that's filled with raw truth.
mommy
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Humm..well the sotry of the love is the same..and the story line of the love is the same..yes the feelings of it may be differnt to express in a wonderful work of poetry..well done...
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wow i love it!~
thanks for sharing with all of us!
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Thank you
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Great imagery and write I like "Steal my heart,
rip it up. : best to you in the contest.
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Well done, you described lonliness perfectly!
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Whoa! Amazing write hun! A beautiful take on the prompt! Surly its worth a trophy! Wonderful work! Good Luck!
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