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sprunglain

sprunglain out, I kiss you deeply

a vast expanse like a whip sprunglain --
this I seek a justice surface tension a pinpoint of texture riven derived
from light's charmed quark, the massless center of perception

and the fallen quarks tumble like waddling ice cream
upon the tongues of angels

seeking the oceans of cowdom


I kiss
you deeply

where the side of Jesus gave us the requiem of touch
or the bedlam of pretense


the dead man's mouth's oval lie
knows at last there is only the mortality of fear

and in all this does the sprunglain heart of the child
hold the dead kitten's titanic heart deeply sprunglain

sprunglain, I kiss you deeply and there shall no death ever be again rung
I am the bell of freedom and light

I the curled arms of the one left behind, and happy to be so able
to give thanks to thee, my love

if shall I this ever be within thee so well sprung, and laid thou shalt be
within my blood and a fish upon it shall carry

the charmed quarks of light

deeply sprunglain is the fetus of truth
let the dead man's mouth's oval lie


sprunglain out, I kiss you deeply

a vast expanse like a whip sprunglain --
this I seek a justice surface tension a pinpoint of texture riven derived

and the fallen quarks tumble like waddling ice cream
upon the tongues of angels and let the dead man's mouth's oval lie

















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sprunglain ... don't even go there it is a bona fide word now ... because i say so, it is ... don't go there

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  • white stone
    May 13, 2009

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    "and the fallen quarks tumble like waddling ice cream
    upon the tongues of angels"

    That is surely one brain twisting image you penned there, my friend. Enjoyed the depth and scope.


  • Envelope
    March 10, 2009
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    i think leaving me speechless is tantamount to a trophy, wouldn't you say??


  • Loki silver member
    February 21, 2009

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    Makes much more sense to me this time through. There are many points to this which stand out, but the line that stands out the most each time I read is "this I seek a justice surface tension a pinpoint of texture riven derived
    from light's charmed quark, the massless center of perception"

    Perhaps it is just that you used some of my favorite words in it. I won't venture a definition, for this is one of those word creations that may mean something different to each who reads it. I will only say that I wish I had spawned this word first.

    Bravo!


  • Night Hope gold member
    February 20, 2009

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    What do I think??? Sheeesh. When I sit in front of this stupid screen & read such intellect, such artistry, such complete majesty laid out upon this cyber parchment for mine eyes to feast upon...I do not think. I only dine...divinely...with such utter grace & gratitude that this wretched, cold, cruel, beautiful world could ever contain one such as you. Good enough for ya, Darlin'???



  • Night Hope gold member
    February 16, 2009
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    You make me dance on the heads of pins, my Beloved. Even with my two big ol' left feets.

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