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Scent of You

The delicious aroma of your cologne
Mixes perfectly-
With the fragrance of my desire
Blending, swirling..sweetly intoxicating;
If only, my dear if only
It was you and not just the scent you left behind...

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  • The scent that lingers does bring longing behind. A shirt, on a pillow, and even on the skin. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing it with the group so I was able to read it.


    MJ


  • GoddessofSensuality
    December 23, 2009

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    yes I like it......short & sweet definitely to the point......jumps off the page at you letting the reader know what is meant.......sensual in the same (scent) sense....love peace & harmony


  • rosepoet
    November 30, 2009
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    wow sensual, sexy, tempting short write


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    September 29, 2009

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    Ooh now I REALLY like this!
    Very sensual with a deep sense of longing; a fine, fine sharing this is!
    Very well done!
    Thank you for sharing your work at Erotic Desires and have a fine day!


  • sense surreal
    March 13, 2009
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    and not just the scent you left behind, whoa, I ditto mcfreeman

  • mcfreeman
    February 17, 2009
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    the scent of U went with U

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