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Taken for Granted

I had this ledge you see; a skinny windowsill.
Twas as thin as can be; staying on it took skill.

There was this routine, a bird came by each mornin',
Had I had an open screen, they'd have come right in.

Too picky I was always to accept their kind.
Instead I stayed in a daze; I'd nothing in mind.

These birds I couldn't admire, as I crazily once thought.
I wasn't inspired to aspire; seeking still what I sought.

So at their highest moment of ease, I tapped upon the glass
And away they flew into the breeze, never again to pass.

Lacking the harmonious ring of each bird's different song;
Silent loneliness made me sing, thinking I'd done wrong.



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Published to AP February 16th

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  • Denerica
    February 17
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    Nice flow and the imagery of the birds and the point was well written. Blessings.


  • Paloszoo gold member
    February 17

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    Lovely images with a rather sad ending. Nice flow and rhyme! Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. It’s an honor to have you show your work here!