I miss you....my life is in shambles
I love you... my heart is still broken
I need you...my tears don't dry
No one will ever understand...
Author notes
i was listening to a song on my ipod and it made me sad so i wrote this.
''Loving you was my favorite mistake''
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awww this makes me feel so sad.
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very touching.. nicely done
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I really am topuched by this one. I hope that the feeling passes. This is a great poem. It's really cute.
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thanks ryan.
don't worry this feeling has been long gone for a while now.
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oh what song were you listening to?? i like your poem. its short and to the point. lol great work. lol
kaycee
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