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Beautiful Awakening

Rays of sunlight shining through the blinds,
as the last images of the dream I do see.
Eyes slowly open and you my gaze finds,
laying so silent next to me.

I feel the warmth of your naked flesh against mine,
as you lie there so silent, sound asleep.
How I long to have our bodies entwined,
embraced within such passion our hearts will keep.

But I remain motionless watching you in silent admiration,
such beauty you possess that touches my heart so much.
The sight of you filling me with such exhilaration,
as my body starts craving your gentle touch.

Your eyes open to look at me as you smile,
then our lips meet in a gentle tender kiss.
Passionate kisses we savor for awhile,
never these bodily passions to we resists.

We make love there within the morning sun's glow,
bodies joined as one as we grind to our savagely beating hearts.
Enveloped within the sensations our hearts now does bestow,
as a morning romance now starts.

Forever shall we share our tender love,
as we feel the bliss of the moment flood through us.
Our unity witnessed by the angels above,
as the friction burns us with each tender thrust.

Such a moment to share within the awakening dawn,
with a woman so wonderful whose passion is never gone.
Good morning my darling, I love you so,
and every waking hour how I long for it to show.

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  • abybaby
    March 2

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    MAGICAL

    once again u have did it brother.......i always look forward to read from you......nd this is a real masterpiece here

    cheers
    abybaby


  • Sandygram silver member
    February 19
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    Lovely words my friend

    A lovely poem. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Take care, Sandy


  • geckogirl silver member
    February 18

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    Michael I love this piece you have penned. You always show such beauty in your write. Well done here.
    Sue