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Day 2 of the test



Antigua calls to me across the sea
Where England's finest fight to clear their shame
A clash of nations witnessed on TV
Some fool is sure to say it's just a game

The scoring mounts and with each run a smile
That "fifty-one" is fading ball by ball
Since Collingwood is hanging round a while
The total that we reach will not be small

A declaration at a decent score
Before we get a gift from Captain Gayle
A ball he ought to smash for six or four
Should I feel bad to see a batsman fail?

I'll sleep a little better after that
A flannelled fool who's ruled by ball and bat


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  • wave1080
    2 days ago
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    Wow

    I like this and love cricket .


    • cricketjeff gold member
      2 days ago
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      What's life if it's not cricket
      Played to rather different rules
      When the last ball hits your wicket
      You must leave this stage of fools
      But so long as you are batting
      Keep your bat straight, eye on ball
      And the little bumps you're patting
      Do not change the pitch at all.

      • wave1080
        2 days ago
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        Very true Jeff

        But even when you're batting straight
        you have no reason to wait,
        go after the bowling , for
        even if the last ball hits the wicket
        you don't leave this stage of fools
        coz if it's a no ball , your still in
        this game of cricket

  • abu nuwas
    August 20
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    Of course it's good.....

    it's about cricket!


  • SimplyNoodle
    March 9

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    Very good, what is cricket? Keep writting.
    ~chelsey

  • Purrsanthema
    February 19

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    I don't like or enjoy sports, but I love this poem, and I can appreciate fans' love for their team! I wish I knew more of the terminology so I could enjoy it better!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    February 18

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    I had to click on this one. I bet I'm the only person who gets the reference to the flannelled fool.

    How much more civilised this particular match is without all those stupid referrals - a lesson there, I think!


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    February 17
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    Cricket, right?

    I'm betting that this is a very good poem.


  • moonbumps silver member
    February 17

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    Tch! You and your cricket!
    Sounds more interesting this way!
    Bumps


  • Cannonsfire
    February 16

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    lol This aussie won't let you forget the 51 that easily but truly if you can't give the Windies a run for their money then those Ashes are looking mighty juicy for a rerun back to the Antipodes lol C


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 16
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    heh. Must be a helluva game

    Love
    Passions

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