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On The Edge

My twisted fate
in this deadly world
brings me on the tip of its cliff.
I can't face the challenges
it throws at me.
My shield is wearing down
and will soon show my true soul
to all the eyes looking at me
like I don't belong here.
But one day,
I will be on the ground,
covered with blood,
and slowly die
with all the shattered dreams
I made a promise to,
because when I'm on the edge,
I fall.

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