We are the monsters that living upstairs
We gotta make a living ‘cos we got a new lair
With blood and urine, we made it our own
So if you wanna join us, make yourself at home
We are the monsters go bump in the night
But don’t blame us we’re just having a good time
With a pub in the attic and a brothel in the back
Once you go monster you will never go back
Once you go monster you will never go back
Never go back
Become one of us now
We don’t seem all that bad
Once you get to know us
Author notes
This song is about tempatations.
Thoughts?
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"you'll be all too glad!"
Well, my only verdict is that you revise a couple of grammer errors. Nothing too big.
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revise?
first line "we are the monsters that [are] living upstairs"
also second stanza "we are the monsters [that] go bump in the night"
but that one works either way, you might have made it like that so it fits in the song.
other than that great write!
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These words are often so frivolous in a song, that they are not needed. A clasic example of this is in most of Gorillaz songs.
hence,
(from Rock It by Gorillaz)
I didn't mean to do it
It lovely in my head
I tried to be a charmer
Got a bit hopless instead
The world is very sexy
It part of my collapse
Gorillaz don't often put the "s" in the word "its". I have just taken from this example.
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*hopeless
(typing fast)
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