A rainy night shadowed
by mourning clouds
tempt the hand of fate
As clandestine lovers
creep into a sea of oblivion
and uninhibited shame
pursuing perverted yearnings
of their salacious needs
by crossing the bloodline
Siblings of alternate fathers
nestle in the abasement
of wanton passion
As they succumb to erotic pleasures
that extinguish the fires of hell
deep within their loins
Intermingling flesh scrape
the course of taboo affections
with reckless abandon
Allured by the enigmatic pull
of a seductive moon,
veiled beneath layers of
an eerie mist
The silence of midnight
whispers in blissful torment
amidst a prison of lustful interchange
As wretched bodies ignite ravenous
appetites that illuminate pulsating
veins with elixirs of fervent love
Bewitched by the reprobation
of carnality that drives them
beyond the realms of decency
toward isles of decadent rapture
in a world slightly askew
inside the twilight zone
A contest entry
- ~From the heart~ by Serenity-words.
2700 points, ended February 20, 2009, 44 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this poem had a few twist in it mr howard dark erotic passion and a message you worked a lot of power into one write nice job
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If the Twilight Zone is like this I want to enter into it.........
GREAT SEXY POEM WHICH HINTS THE EROTICA
Bring'ing the whole verse to life.
Great Write.
Eamon..
THE BEST PARTS OF IT FOR ME IS BELOW.
Bewitched by the reprobation
of carnality that drives them
beyond the realms of decency
toward isles of decadent rapture
in a world slightly askew
inside the twilight zone
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WOW! Very powerful words. You definitely have the gift of writing.
I am so impressed with this write!
GOOD LUCK!! You deserve it!
S-
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did someone go and watch Underworld: Rise of the Lycans????? Crossing bloodlines is a great line and brings forth so many images. Wonderfully dark and sensual!
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mmm mmm
love it!
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WOW!!!
Ohhh god, I loved this!!! Amazing, thanks so much for putting this into my contest!!!!!!
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