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Dark Secret Pleasures

A rainy night shadowed
by mourning clouds
tempt the hand of fate

As clandestine lovers
creep into a sea of oblivion
and uninhibited shame

pursuing perverted yearnings
of their salacious needs
by crossing the bloodline

Siblings of alternate fathers
nestle in the abasement
of wanton passion

As they succumb to erotic pleasures
that extinguish the fires of hell
deep within their loins

Intermingling flesh scrape
the course of taboo affections
with reckless abandon

Allured by the enigmatic pull
of a seductive moon,
veiled beneath layers of
an eerie mist

The silence of midnight
whispers in blissful torment
amidst a prison of lustful interchange

As wretched bodies ignite ravenous
appetites that illuminate pulsating
veins with elixirs of fervent love

Bewitched by the reprobation
of carnality that drives them
beyond the realms of decency

toward isles of decadent rapture
in a world slightly askew
inside the twilight zone










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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    February 18

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    this poem had a few twist in it mr howard dark erotic passion and a message you worked a lot of power into one write nice job


  • Eamon
    February 18
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    If the Twilight Zone is like this I want to enter into it.........

    GREAT SEXY POEM WHICH HINTS THE EROTICA
    Bring'ing the whole verse to life.
    Great Write.

    Eamon..

    THE BEST PARTS OF IT FOR ME IS BELOW.

    Bewitched by the reprobation
    of carnality that drives them
    beyond the realms of decency

    toward isles of decadent rapture
    in a world slightly askew
    inside the twilight zone


  • snowbird600
    February 17

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    WOW! Very powerful words. You definitely have the gift of writing.
    I am so impressed with this write!
    GOOD LUCK!! You deserve it!
    S-


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    February 17

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    did someone go and watch Underworld: Rise of the Lycans????? Crossing bloodlines is a great line and brings forth so many images. Wonderfully dark and sensual!


  • liltulip gold member
    February 17
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    mmm mmm

    love it!


  • Serenity-words
    February 16
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    WOW!!!

    Ohhh god, I loved this!!! Amazing, thanks so much for putting this into my contest!!!!!!

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