Their eyes
are constantly
locked tight
by tar.
Author notes
8 words.
no prompt, just go with your gut.
A contest entry
- aleatoric quickie; --->5/5 by innocence jaded.xx.
400 points, ended February 16, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You brought so much to the table with just 8 words.
Very well penned, with such depth to it -
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Thank you very much ♥
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You are most welcome
Thanks for sharing it with us
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WOw. Just wow. Says so much in so little space. Wow.
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^-^ Thank you.
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wow this is really amazing
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:] thanks!
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hrm, interesting
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^-^teehee
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ohhh wow. this is brilliant. i absolutely love this (: incredibly put. thank you ! (: ♥
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Thank you very much for silver!!
I look forward to the next round!!
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