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Viviyen

Vivacious angel, sleeping through the night,
Invigorating spirit rises in the morn.
Valiantly embracing all that is life,
Imitating naught but thine own personality,
You are unique as God intended you to be.
Embracing challenges, never kneeling to defeat,
Neglectful of none and loved by all.

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thank you for reading me


i chose this name as it is similar to my own

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  • stavykm gold member
    February 17
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    Just Beautiful

    Wow what a beautiful dedication to another. This poem is so uplifting and lovingly encouraging. What a wonderful friend you have in this precious soul of another. It is such a blessing to have friends like this. Best wishes in the contest! Thank you for commenting on one of my poems.

    Blessings,
    Much Love,
    Kelle Marie