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Intentsity

In mind's purple fog,
energies form,
become electrified.

Thoughts compound,
charged with
emotion.

Idea solidifies...

I test the results,
not once, but
several times...

only to find myself,
grounded once
again.

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  • Figaro
    February 28
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    Great imagery very interesting.


  • aboomer silver member
    February 20

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    Congrats on this being spot-lighted!!


  • duckonahockeypuck
    February 20
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    Very good write.
    I enjoyed it.

  • oldpoets
    February 20
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    Short, very nice. Good luck to you.


  • liltulip gold member
    February 20
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    i like this!

    thanks for sharing!

  • prochick
    February 20
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    plz gimme more


  • aboomer silver member
    February 16
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    Great wording - goes great with that picture!
    best wishes in your contest

  • Nicely done. Fantastic metaphor.

    Mike


  • Tirrell
    February 16
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    Well done my friend, I can see inspiration at work here, and love the images. Best of luck!


  • TheSpiralGenerator
    February 16
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    Somehow this reminds me a lot of Tool lyrics. I really like it. Thanks for entering, and good luck!

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