She rescued you in the nick of time
But is it her who plays hard on your mind
Your father never got no say
On his return you were gone away
He loves you so that cant be ignored
Im sure you felt his love before
He deserves to know that your
Keeping well
Im sure hes torn and broke aswell
Dont regret what you must do
Im sure he woud like to hear from you
Its not his fault he was out of town
He would like to know were you are now
If he was sick and dieing would you pay no heed
Or would you rather tell him that you forgive
To many hearts get broke in two so many mouths
Tell us what to do
Be the one who closes the gap
Pick up a pen write him a letter
Dont leave it to late the sooner the better
Your mother will tell you dont live to regret
You gave her a chance to get back in your life
He deserves the same its all down to you
But dont take my word its only my view
But life is so hard and you dont need the guilt
Both of your parents should be be involved
In your life not to confuse you but to work at
Things right
They both should be the parents and you shouldnt
Feel so torn i hope you get intouch
Then your head wont be so wrecked
Guilt is hard to swallow and at times theres no
Way back
Author notes
i hope you make contact with your dad dont let your grandma win she didnt care for your fathers feelings and yours she certainly must rule dont blame your dad he just might not be strong enough to stand up to his mum but im sure it wrecked him when he came home to find you gone im glad you found your mum again and its all working out for you and sorry to hear about your brother but it would be awful if anything were to happen your dad you wouldnt forgive yourself he would love to hear from you you are his daughter after all dont let your grandmother be the one who stops you from getting intouch hope it works out for you fingers crossed
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- Torn between two worlds by flounder416.
400 points, ended March 27, 19 entries
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Comments
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eye opening
so rich of works that speak of life today -
Thanks for the message. I liked the message in this..very well written. I am sorry for what you had to go through. Take care.
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A nice write about a topic arising all too often in the lives of many. Happy trails.
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I like this poem but itwoild flow much better when spelling and grammar are fixed. Be careful of cliché rhymes.
Best of luck in the contest!
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