a pebble
on top of the mountain -
dark cloud
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mountain
A contest entry
- Haiku, Senryu, or Tanka! by TheSpiralGenerator.
1050 points, ended February 19, 2009, 39 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Im not great at understanding haikus but they interest the hell out of me ;-) I like this one! X
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LOL... it takes a great sense of humor (and perception) to write this one. It over flows with karumi and yet the cloud is dark... a lightness in darkness..... and a "pebble"... good eye Myron. Solid write.
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ohhhhhh I get it.
Gotta love those a-ha moments!
Took me a second, but I've been studying non-stop for days.
Beautiful!
Best,
EL
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Ah Ha!!!!!!!!
love it -
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ah ha
thanks!
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oooo!!!! this is FANTASTIC... wow.. amazing imagery.. a very thought provoking poem indeed!
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imagery
thanks you very much; i'm pleased you like it.
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Congratulations on the Trophy, such quiet strength in this haiku.
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congrats
thank you very much. congrats to you as well for your gold trophy.
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A WOW
JUST WHAT AZURE HAS STATES LOVE IT
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a pebble
on top of the mountain -
dark cloud
An excellent haiku, with great contrast between the small pebble and the huge mountain. Good AHA moment in L3, it makes you think.
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contrast
Thank you very much Susan! Glad you liked it.
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Pretty. I liked this one a lot. Well, I like all your haiku. Anyway, good write.
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pretty
Thanks Stormy - glad you read it, and also that you liked it.
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