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Heart Ache

The world begins to spend,
another restless night!
Heart torn to pieces,
hoping that your alright!


I try harder and harder,
but things just get worse!
Be a man stand up for urself,
I hear all the time!


Heart wants to stay,
Mind wants to go!
The pain is getting worse,
the farther away she gets!


When will it all end,
the will finally stop!
Maybe one day she'll see,
the love i hold for her!


Till then the world will spin,
the pain will stay!
I'll shed some tears,
then it will all end!

be honest

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  • alwaysapartofme
    February 16

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    Oh wow! i am speechless! this is wow! it is sad but amazing. one question is everything ok? I mean you haven't wrote something this sad in awhile. anyway it was really great and i really liked it!!