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Disintegrated Love

Cyclone formed in my mind
Seeing the disarranged letters.

Spelling of my name
I forgot for the first time ever.

Blank brain has
No choices in the darkness

Poor wingless heart
Can’t fly to anywhere
Just to forget the Past.

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Prompt: my valentine's card has her name in it

30-40 words

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  • Kuranya gold member
    February 22, 2009
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    So sad, your images here are so great. I enjoyed this one. Best to you in the contest