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Dear Mother

Mother dear
Can you here
I won't be here

Next year
I'll be away

But mother dear
Can you hear
I love you so
Don't you fear

You don't want me to go
But you know
I'll always be here
I love you so

 

That I'm you little girl

Your baby

You already know.

So say goodbye
Hug me tight
It won't be the last

Say goodbye
But not for long
Cause remember
You have your cell phone

Don't you cry
Don't you cry
Cause you know
I'll be right out your window

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  • Allie-
    February 19

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    on the second line i think that here should be hear....
    i love this poem!! its kinda sad..and it tells so much!! <3

  • FallingRainDrop
    February 16

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    this is such a cute poem. i hope your mom appreciates having you as a daughter, not many write nice poems bout their parents! loved it :]