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Faith is the path

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With every winter morning, that dawns so blue and clear
and with each afternoon in spring I feel your presence here
To hear the song of birds, or feel the warmth of summer sun
I know they are a gift for me and know you are the one

The giver of all that I love with each breath that I take
your newest gift I'm opening, each morning when I wake
Your story is unfolding and always with surprise
I wander on the path provided lovely to my eyes

 You have so much to offer me, and always give it free
for nothing more than loving you as it was meant to be
Through every second, everywhere, in every way I know
you are this world  I'm living in no matter where I go.

 

Faith is the path I walk along, and with each step I take

the beauty I behold each day, tells me there's no mistake

it's always you my lord, my God in everything I see

 this wonder that is life the greatest gift you've given me.

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  • Denerica
    March 2

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    Bravo! Amen!

    You just have a way to make your words stand out, may those reading this be inspired to believe if they hadn't, stronger faith if it was waivered. Just so much like a praise and worship write. Blessings.


  • Emile
    February 24

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    Good

    Very powerful and full of emotion. It says a lot and yet doesn’t dwell on the pain... your belief in God's love and mercy is strongly evident and inspiring...I'm sure it brings you comfort. Great work from a gentle man.


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    February 22

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    awsome

    I just loved the line I love with the newest breathe that I take your newest gift that I open. Thats a beautiful sentence.. It was a pleasure to rea your poem.

  • Ah..yes..faith is the path we all walk along..so true..and so much dedicated poetry to HIM as well..love the intimacy for HIM..and the beauty of the thoughts you poured..well done...

  • sleepinglion
    February 19
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    A beautiful descriptive poem, God in everything I see, that I like


  • Di Shirley
    February 19

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    Wow If only all could see the meaning of life and love through these eyes. Man would ultimately find the peace he seeks. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece. Di


  • Sandygram
    February 18
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    So Very Uplifting

    Your words are so beautiful and so uplifting my friend. He has given us so much beauty in each season. Sometimes we fail to see all He has created for His children to enjoy. I love this poem. I needed to read something to uplift me today. Thank you for this lovely poem. Hugs, Sandy me

  • cirque du soleil
    February 17

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    oh wow..this is so...umm...sure? i'm not sure if thats the bestway to put it though

    I like the calmness here...faith is so reassuring


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    February 16

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    Oh how beautiful and is very true. You have graced this contest with a truly wonderful write. I just love that second stanza! Amazing flow and rhyme, as always.
    Best wishes in the contest.
    Gaylene


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    February 16

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    you touched my soul with this one,

    that is how you know, the beauty comes to life

    everything appears precious

    this poem is no exception

    and written in your always perfect rhyme

    outstanding gorgeous soulful write

    God bless you my friend...

     


  • Rose Angel gold member
    February 16

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    Beautiful penning here....flow and rhyme extremely good...Second line missing an l on feel.....Delightful to read.... write

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