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The sound adverted

Purposefully
helplessly
he walks

stalks his prey
sheds his hair
makes her pray

a new
beauty

irreverant
claustrophobic

hands held high
close your eyes

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  • cheaphotelsign
    September 13
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    i suck. i forgot the clappies


  • cheaphotelsign
    September 13

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    wow...this is an intense little write...darkly beautiful...even sensual...a certain driving force behind this...puts a plethora of images in my mind...i really dig this...the last two lines are killer...well done