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Doves




When the doves fly,

tail feathers fan in

white pleated valance;

sweet angel-like.


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  • BellaAmare
    February 18, 2009

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    Very Good!

    Very good. And very poetic.
    Doves, are rarely seen in some parts of the world,
    but they are simply beautiful.
    And are pure.
    I admit, I will look up the word valance in a sec.
    Ok, I lookd it up. Hehe. It sounds very poetic,
    and very beautiful.


  • Blueskywonder
    February 16, 2009
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    Lovely imagery and a pleasure to read


    • Simply Olivia
      February 16, 2009
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      Thank you, Stephen

      Are you planning to use the allotment again this year?


      • Blueskywonder
        February 16, 2009
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        I have just returned from there; smelling of smoke.lol
        Liz gave me 3ton of mushroom compost for valentine's day
        I plan to use the allotment as much as i can.
        I was hoping the mushtoom compost wouldn't turn up; it would have given me leverage for valentine's night
        Thank-you for asking.
        I hope all is well