How do I compare you
to the sun?
Your bright, sunny face
Brings joy and light to all.
How do I compare you
To a rose?
Your radiance and beauty
Comforts us all.
How do I compare you
to a tree?
You grow, reaching up
for the sky.
How do I compare you
to air?
I survive on you, and cannot
bare to let you go
How do I compare you
to the sky?
So big, so ready to
embark on a journey.
And how do I compare you
to nature?
So beautiful and natural,
But so easy to destroy.
- Young Writers group list • next in list
A contest entry
- Looking for New Favourites ~ Give me your best by Aussie Gypsy.
800 points, ended April 28, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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This is a little beauty to be sure. I like the way you went about this. Best to you in the contest
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This is cute! I'm always a sucker for metaphors.
And the last two lines so much impact; they're my favorite. Great job!
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wow. i feel like that about someone. lots of people feel like that. amazing! good job, keep it up!
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this is so beautiful! it's so vivid and i love the methaphors. it's amazing!! really!!
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Is this about anyone in particular? sorry that was really nosey!
The poem is so beautiful, i love your descriptions, and at the end how you finalise the poem. It is very well written.
Holly.
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