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a sisters goodbye

My dearest little brother,
I know you will hate me for this,
leaving you in that hell hole,
for a dark peaceful bliss.
Please know i tried my hardest
to stay there just for you,
but with all his hatred on me,
I didn't know what else to do.
You were my best friend,
the only thing that made it ok,
but even as hard as I fought,
the sadness wouldn't go away.
I no longer fear death,
in fact I welcome it with open arms,
the only tears I cry,
are for leaving you in his harm.
Your the only reason i had,
for ever staying around,
your the reason I picked myself up,
after he shoved me to the ground.
I know you'll be stronger than me,
because your better in everyway,
Brendan I love you,
but in this life I just can't stay.

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please dont hate me for this little brother
i will always love you

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  • Rick Weston silver member
    August 23

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    wow, such a powerful piece. the bravery of these words and love for a brother speaks well to the heart of the abused speaker. a very well written, emotion packed poem.


  • April-gurl
    March 27

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    amazing

    You write such good poetry, take pride in your work this one is sad and sweet. I guess you could call it bitter-sweet