Tension of the guitar strings
releasing sonic spins
resonating hymns
spreading out like canary wings
I find mind immortality
in the release of my deformity
sounds choosing my conformity for me
like a door slowly opening
to the world between worlds
where the amperage swirls.
Author notes
dabpunx
A contest entry
- Prewrites / Freshwrites Based on Music by evershine-90.
1400 points, ended September 23, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What does it mean to you?
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Ahhh, This is beautiful with the music, love the way the music plays with the mind and the way it flows with your striking words, like being released from all the qualms of the world and entering into a stunning land of blissful music. Love this piece and the music!! Thank you for entering my contest!
Evershine
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thank you for holding this.
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I'd appreciate it if you'd add the name of the instrumental this poem is based upon, because the contest's purpose is to feel the poem along with the music. I'll take a look at this once you message me the music's name or youtube link since i just realized that your AN has been anonymized. Thank you
Evershine -
Now I had
to go to the dictionary. I had an idea 'cause of the write, but wasn't sure! Like the content, your descriptive word choice that embraces great imagery & your flow & rhyme. Good explanation of the Title!
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I love the image of music spreading out like wings, 'the world between worlds' and 'amperage swirls' gives me an electric shock!
Yes, it's all about the music.
Good work, poet.
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i lika dis stuff
you got alot of fans tito cheese -
I really like this one.
The flow is a little interrupted by the "for me" in the 7th line.
Intentional?
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Music, making music, playing and creating something form yourself.
great write! this is a feeling that i have been missing out on for a while.
but this poem add on to the people i know, might just get me back into this it.
great imsperation.
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well its up there with other great things you can give at least
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inspiration is the greatest thing anyone can give i think.. so i am honored wow..
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nice one bro, it really spoke to me
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its all about the music man thanks a lot.
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i love this poem so much
i like ur rhymes
wordz
style
nd imagination
great write
Very very nice
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thank you!!!
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It's interesting, but honestly it's confusing to read somewhat. The sentences are runons. But once you get it, this is intriguing.
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i changed the spacing to make it easier to read thank you for your comment.
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