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Dallying With Dali


Medicated easel subconsciously coughing life,
Rifle fluffy dusty calligraphy-black,
Back to white, as clouded dusk rings,
demanding novel music, Rocking
Rolling imagery, creates thought,
aught to comfort paperback people
steepled silver spirits, starlight apathetic,
frenetic peace fuzzy imagery, cerulean
peony quilted water, flows inkwell high,
lie on scrawled cross shredded romantically
by  noted waxen impresario moustached,
detached, paints scrawled like bells,
tells slithering notes to unwilling world.


Author notes

all word bank used: Peace
Cloud
Inkwell
Apathetic
Novel
Music
Note
Paperback
Medicated
Subconscious
Romantic
Coughing
Life
Starlight
White
Black
Calligraphy
Scrawled
Shredded
Rocking
Rolling
Fuzzy
Fluffy
Silver
Water
Cerulean
Dusk
Dusty
Comfort
Quilt
Bell
Ring
Imagery
Spirit
Thought
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  • Simply Simple
    March 24

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    Hmmm... A very different use of the word bank. I like the sort of abstract creepiness. Which leaves a lot of the poem open to interpretation. Sorry for the late comment.


  • Rheea gold member
    February 23
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    ah hah!! I was reading up your list backwards I love this no more crossed eyes.


  • arafura gold member
    February 16
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    Great work. Very clever indeed.


  • Ravensdark
    February 16

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    Abstract imagery that certainly beguiles. I like this alot. It has an eiree almost haunting mystery to it. This guv' is a great piece of work. Goodluck in the contest....if this doesn't get a trophy of some discription then I for one will be somewhat annoyed.