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Paradoxical Love

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False instincts...
Lead to false realities.

My mind realizes truth
While body ignores.

This love in unreal.
This love is a lie.


I want him.
Nothing can keep me from him.

I hate this.
I need this.

Eyes sincere...
Dark intentions within.

My resistance is weak.
My offensive strong.

I struggle
Fight...
Surrender.

I'm his...

Unwillingly...
Happily.

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Picture Credit: Pure As White by manips-of-artist2

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  • SteveS gold member
    May 8

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    The volley of will and desire. This poem is like a tennis match with the shoulder angel and devil. Well done.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 1

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    Ahh the internal struggle... you've captured it well here and I think it works for the picture!!


  • checkmate-
    February 23

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    Great job! I really like this poem. Awesome description, and I love the contrast in the narrator's mind...

    AND it's got part of my name in it. Bonus

    -Paradox


  • LadyDementia gold member
    February 23

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    Very interesting take, battle of the wills. A kinda love to hate you and vice versa. Excellent take on the picture, thank you for entering and good luck


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    February 16

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    unwillingly...happily.

    great take on the pic, trying to defend yourself from the emotions, but giving into them...
    nicely done

    best of luck

    love, light & laughter
    Tasha

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