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I'll Wait

However hard life is,
I'll wait
However far away you are,
I'll wait

I'll wait till we can be together,
I'll wait till i can be by your side
What ever obstacles are put in our way
We'll make it through, Side by side

You make up my thoughts
As each day passes
I swear we are getting closer, yet we're so far away
My heart belongs to you
Promise me you'll keep it safe

However long this takes, My Sweet
I'll wait

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  • musik-freek
    March 9
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    one word hannah...
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. I love this poem, like dani said it flows so well, and its so simple and sweet... love it!!
    you are too cool
    love you lots <3


  • November-Dani
    February 16

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    Oh man, this flows so well. Its beautiful. I love the repitition of i'll wait. wow this is possibly my fave of all your poems. mainly cuz there is so much meaning and reason behind it. so much love and hope.
    Great work babe.
    XXXX