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Perhaps

I'm tough,
resilient
not sure
that I want to be.

Not sure,
Maybe
that's the reason
you don't love me.

Guess it was inevitable
you found out
that I'm un-lovable. 
At least you tried

I guess

although
that makes it worse
perhaps.







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  • fantasysmurf
    February 18

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    Resilient

    The background and border suit this sombre poem. I know that my emotions drive out really good work. So here it is working for you too. The maybe/perhaps theme rolls through this piece well. Keep that head up, ShortyJo x


  • k.a.s.s.i.e
    February 16
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    can't wait till it's done! it's really good so far.

    kAsSiE