Upon the shores of Lothlogiia,
A bare unicorn, with freedom in his name
Shines its presence towards the cloudless skies,
Smiling, bestowing loveliness, longingness
To the sea-green flowing shores below.
Feeding upon the world of green,
All he has ever known, all he shall ever need,
Upon the hoofs of his aged body
Yet strength is not lost from this horse.
The crashing of the sea roars towards the heavens
As a fair maiden, such as I, walks the miles
Towards the last, soft breath of
Foreverness.
My eyes are opened
I am home.
Author notes
This is the first thing I saw when I closed my eyes...And it was beautiful.
A contest entry
- Close your eyes and tell me what you see, fouth chapter by Meroza.
850 points, ended March 6, 10 entries
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Comments
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This is strong, and brilliant. Such beauty behind closed eyes, I envy you.
Thank you for entering.
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Good images!
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