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beginning, now and end




there is a tomorrow~
that todays

~a yesterday
to follow.














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  • Rudy Ignatius
    February 18

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    I have re-read this so many times I have began to jumble the words up until it no longer makes an ounce of sense. Tried and true, this is poetry with an ultimatum: either understand it, or let it overwhelm you blissfully.

    Lovely, Tand!

    Brit

    • wendymolly
      February 20
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      Thankyou Brit, yeah, I'm not so sure I even have a lock on this one. It started out a heavier poem, then after some carving, ended up in this way. I think in a way it says that maybe there are no yesterdays, times present or tomorrows, but that everything is happening so fast that there is no real accounting of time itself.
      If not... well then... I am just as confused if not more so than you!!!!
      Your right.
      Take care always,
      Tandy