Your hands cascade over my body-
thighs trembling in ecstasy.
My lips parting-
forming words that don't make sound.
As my eyes close it just becomes too much,
and I feel your desire in me-
I surrender...
I'm The Author Of My Own Life,
Unfortunately I'm Writing In Blood,
and Can't Erase My Mistakes....
Author notes
Hope you like it! Make sure to tell me what you think. Thanks.
A contest entry
- Swift This Line (Inspired by Ken Maverick) by Ademon.
700 points, ended February 16, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very profound. I enjoyed this one alot. Congratulations on the silver cup. It was well deserved.
Great job.
Mike
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It's brilliant! I absolutely loved the way you took this prompt and something that i wasn't even thinking! Great job
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Thank you for such an amazing comment- I haven't been in the game for awhile so I was biting my nails on this one.
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