His silhouette is like a God's
each breath from him
a pulse in my ears
Skin shining dancing in
pale moonlight as fingertips
slowly brush down his back
A painting of canvas
this breathless view before me
lips curve along the neck
soft, slow kisses
gentle nibbles bring slight moans
euphoric wonderment at the scene before me
Reaching out hand in hand
as we ride into heavenly abandonment
relishing the desires felt between
you, me, and the sheets of bliss
as we cradle together in searing heat
(made from each other)
Lips meet in gentle union
as soul binds together
free to intertwine
ethereal worlds we bring together
here alone forever in stated bliss
we complete each other.
Author notes
For Aaron (Ademon) Who may be feeling just a little lonely 
In a list
A contest entry
- Romancing Aaron- Ladies please apply by Cannonsfire.
4800 points, ended February 25, 2009, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Interesting?
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Lovely lovely lovely..
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love the pic hehehe great job on this piece truly amazing great job great write keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day -
This Is wonderful, you have written a lovely piece here
I wish you well
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sensual desire beckons with each word a very delicate poem that oozes sex appeal, nice flow and rhythem
well done
abigail
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Beautiful imagery here, it was like lying in a warm summer rain. Exquisite.
Best to you in the contest
Shari
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Beautiful words here for this wonderful poet!
I love the third stanza in this one.
Well done dear and good luck to you in this
contest. It's great to read you again!
Jeremy0826
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WOW
*lick*
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this is really beautiful. and now i don't feel so alone
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Oh he will definitely enjoy this contest lol...hope his pulse holds out 
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Me too! It would be such a shame to have to rush him to the ER, Try explaining THAT ONE to the Nurses!
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Reaching out hand in hand
as we ride into heavenly abandonment
relishing the desires felt between
you, me, and the sheets of bliss
as we cradle together in searing heat
(made from each other)
that stanza stood out the most to me and is just awing to read the entire poem is honestly, I am blessed that you have written such an amazing piece of yourself for me in this way, thank you and my heart is humbled by such writings...thank you! Best wishes in the contest!
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I'm glad that you enjoyed this hun! If anyone deserves to be happy, you do. You are an excellent writer, and by the looks of things, a wonderful father as well
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