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Be Mine Today And Always


Dreams of sweet love inspired me in my youth,
But through long years it never graced my life.
I cursed the day that I first heard the truth,
That man needs love to weather bitter strife.

‘Til you appeared to open up my eyes,
And prove my pose was just a hollow sham.
Turning cold words into love’s tender sighs,
You transformed me into all that I am.

Silken tresses frame your dear loving face,
Your smiles give all around a subtle glow.
Passion tinged words make my heart start to race,
Thanking the stars for all that I now know.

And so once more I take your hand in mine,
To ask that you be my Sweet Valentine.

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  • Tattboyspet
    February 16

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    lol! mine seems so childish after reading these words
    and ... of course, i am Yours today and always (even when W/we go grey!)
    i love You


    • Tattboy silver member
      February 17

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      your words were not childish at all, I loved My card. Thank you VERY much.


  • slipperssun gold member
    February 16
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    This is truly beautiful... I hope that she treasures your loving words always...
    cheers
    Jen


    • Tattboy silver member
      February 16
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      I'm sure she will. She also wrote me a beautiful card too for yesterday.