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Dare To Dream



As words wander through whispers
upon precious beats of syllables

 

You...
          captured me

delighting fantasies
in whirlwinds of seduction,
stealing each sigh from within
holding it firmly against tender lips;
you press passion's promise
of what’s to be

as you relinquish all burdens,
surrendering sweet obsessions
into the depths of souls

in silence I desire,

for I shall not refute
the inner beings of wealth
to be had…

behind the darker shade
of shadows~





Author notes

You said I could be an exception Ok... so let this poet dream
HAPPY BIRTHDAY COLIN!!!!!!!!!! XOXO
Credit from your Author page: Book Title " Darker Shade of Shadows"

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  • Legend silver member
    February 22, 2009

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    I am a lover of rhyme but this does not stop me from enjoying other form when written as well as this is. I almost felt like i was intruding on something special That was meant for others eyes
    But what the heck I too can Dare to dream
    Excellent


  • Fug-azi
    February 20, 2009

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    My other sweet sis, I'd know you anywhere and you bring such a delight to my table .. how can I not place you where you belong on the finalist list.


    • jasminerose
      February 20, 2009
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      I am so delighted you enjoyed this and thank you so very much for the HM Bro... couldn't resist wishing YOU a Happy Birthday!!!!!
      Jazzy


  • Harrisham Minhas gold member
    February 19, 2009

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    A gentle and nicely expressed write.
    Good luck to you in this contest, my friend.




  • Liquid memories
    February 16, 2009

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    Wonderful

    Softly your words delight the reader with your dreams, caressing hearts affection with tender thoughts of love. This was lovely as it strolled across the strings of my heart, leaving memories of what sweet amour. Wonderfully written.


  • moonbumps silver member
    February 16, 2009

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    Absolute bliss to read-so gentle a write that I am spellbound-
    Beautiful.
    Good luck with this-
    Hilly xxx


  • poet2angels gold member
    February 15, 2009

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    This is so beautiful and sensually exciting for the birthday boy
    Its a good thing he is still a youngster otherwise reading this may get him before he reaches his b-day
    Beautifully written in your unique style...He will love this, bff!

    Lynda

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