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Coating Crimson

Running down my arms
sweet simplicities
coating skin crimson
tickling soft flesh
Who knew paper cuts
could be this bad?

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Prompt:

"Blood is thicker than water, and much tastier." - Unknown

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  • GoodbyeFarewell
    February 20, 2009

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    wow

    another great job i love how it is so short but great words keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a niceday


  • wildflower. gold member
    February 16, 2009

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    Ouch!
    Papercuts are the worst lolz
    I'd almost rather break my leg
    Great take on the prompt!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 16, 2009
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    oh I likes that


  • jcat gold member
    February 15, 2009

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    EEK.....imagery made me cringe!!! There is seriously NOTHING worse than a paper cut!! Awesome job here and best wishes!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 15, 2009

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    LOL nice.


    Delila


  • Tom The Invader
    February 15, 2009
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    I hope you're not cutting yourself. . .

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