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Dark Desires

Missing image







Here I sit with this whip




~ Patiently ~



~ Waiting ~



For my next playmates




~ Offering ~




To experience my




~ Dark ~




~ Sordid ~




~~~ Desires ~~~
















Author notes

I do not claim the pictures used with this write as my own. Pictures found on yahoo images and Nawayoi.com.

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  • Michael
    August 24
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    Wow. This is a really intense and hot poem. I love it.


  • mcope8050
    May 3

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    YOU ARE SPECIAL

    You cause me to think,,, and move a little differently,,, after reading you work,,, THANKS,,, no I MEAN IT!!! thanks,,,haha


  • Dark Otter
    March 28

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    Fun stuff!

    I have commented before and will do so again. You are good at putting the whole package to gether. Your poems produce particular responses in the male animal that are conducive to sexual well being and just a tad bit of frustrations!


  • Beret55 silver member
    March 22
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    mmmmmmmmmmm girl your HOT.


  • Lonely Christina
    February 23
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    wow this is hot. good job


  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    February 17

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    Ooooh, I absolutely love this. It's so amazingly hot, and I absolutely love the background you've made for it. Hot! Great write.

  • Dark Otter
    February 17
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    Interesting form!

    Free verse with double spacing and lines with single words with heavy punctuation. I like your attempt to alter appearance to get a different, emotional reaction.


  • cre8tiv-writer
    February 16
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    Ooooohhhh!!! Very sexy write H!! Leaves alot to the imagination and more to be wanted!!


  • darell
    February 16

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    Omg!

    I'm scared of yo ass!
    I love that devilish mind of yours.
    I can see you now, whipping dat ass
    with all your hidden skills.


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 16
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    Wow, anticipation in the works. Loved this.


  • Swtpoetryman
    February 16

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    HI, MISS HOT CHOCKLAT - I'M HOME! HE! HE!

    - and I've been a very naughty boy - peeping in windows and a-pulling me willy - and I'm ready to submit and take my punishment like that naughty man that I am! Let the games begin - and let them start with me! HE! HE!
    Love & Peace!
    Earl.


  • Glasyalabolas
    February 16
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    Nice, short enticing piece.Gets the imagination going.

    Good write.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 16

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    Ooohhh WHIP ME you bad girl! lmao
    Very sensual and a lovely background you
    created here hon! Take care!




    Jeremy0826


  • Maxboy gold member
    February 15

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    Very nice and enticing sweetie, but two can play that game, you naughty girl.

    Wonderful


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 15

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    OH I LOVED THIS> the words and the BG

    thanks hon for the bg will use

    Love
    Passions


  • Beret55 silver member
    February 15
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    Short and to the point.. Good take on the prompt..


  • penman gold member
    February 15
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    Wow

    Some intense thoughts here. So truly hot. Great job. Thanks for sharing.

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