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Footprints (A Limerick)

So up the hill and over my foot
A little reble covered in soot,
And tracked this way and that
As a matter of fact,
He left all sooty prints underfoot.

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    February 18
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    l.o.l.

    this is cute, and very nice rhyming to boot!


  • suseann
    February 16
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    An encounter with a fuzzy wittle cotton tail of a tale. And an adorable limerick.


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 16
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    LOL, how adorable. I loved this one.