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bella's jacob

Her timid form, a tiny sway,
by coming here she’s made his day,
with baggage and a heart to mend-
with gentle light, a single ray.

Time was so slow, “but pass it does,”
and pass it will, without what was-
her medicine’s a tight-knot drug,
dragging him in just because…

because she needed light to see,
needed helping hands to be,
“his hand was rough, and very warm-”
and holding hands, he pulled her free.

(as free as she could ever

really

be.)

Author notes

Lines in quotations are from New Moon.
I was always morbidly fascinated by the love triangle...xD

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  • I absolutely loved this. I think it is a great characterization of their relationship during New Moon. Great write.

    Thank you for entering and good luck.


  • xPink-Lotusx
    February 16

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    Very well written!

    Actually I would have to say exceptional. I have always had a morbid fascination with vampires and werewolves, but for some odd reason, I think I prefer the werewolf. Wonderful write.


    • musicalmousie
      February 16
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      Thank you so much! (I prefer the werewolf too...if you couldn't tell xD)