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Thoughts

The one that builds,
something concrete,
can always marvel,
at his feat.

The one that creats things,
in his mind,
will find them lost,
over time.

Something solid,
enduring time,
be seen by all,
a special thing.

Thoughts in the mind,
if not expressed,
are only enjoyed,
by the artist.

Every day,
I enjoy and regret,
the thoughts in my mind,
that will never be expressed.

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  • Denerica
    February 16

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    Oh to forget what we want to write and share, even just to say them or act on them...loved the words,well written for this concept on thoughts. Not sure in stanza 1 if you wanted it to say feat or feet. Blessings.