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Simplicity

Eachday, we live and grow,
trying to find, what there is to know,
we misconceive, what life is about,
trying to live forever, without a doubt.
We should enjoy, every second,
since life could end, at any minute,
the hidden joys, we miss to see,
lie right here, at our feet.

We do not see them,
since we are blind,
from the complex thoughts,
in our minds.
If we would walk,
and look around,
at all the pleasures,
that could be found.

We could find happiness,
in our lives,
kept from us,
by our complex minds.

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  • Denerica
    February 16
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    Keep it simple and be aware...clever write to get one thinking. Well written. Blessings.