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Elephants In my Closet (A Limerick)

There are elephants in my closet
In penned ink, I drew the composite,
As they soon swooned in fear
I saw suddenly clear,
They ran and left me a deposit.

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    March 8

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    Hehehe
    You need to make sure to stop up the hole they got in through!!!

    Thanks for another superb entry

    Jeff


  • Jalalbad gold member
    February 17
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    FUNNIER GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST


  • suseann
    February 17

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    So said that tiny lill' mouse! Ha! Frightfully funny,unless your an elephant. Terrorized and scared shiteless.Too funny.


  • Lowell Poe
    February 16
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    poor boy

  • Lowell Poe
    February 16

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    hahahhaha ....very good..
    i hope they ran out in single file....lol
    Funny little gem among many stones.

    Peace,
    Liam


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 16
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    Lol, don't want to know about any deposits. Good write, dearone.

  • ea silver member
    February 16
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    It seems you were a landlord to elephants.

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