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Embraced

Missing image
In Your Arms
I finally feel safe,
no harm can come to me
especially heartbreak and tears.
The warmth of your body
so close to mine keeps
my heart from turning cold.
The feel of your fingers
upon my skin, and your breath
upon my neck makes me sigh
and float across dreams of eternal happiness.

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short and sweet

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  • Remnant
    February 17
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    Beautiful sentiments
    Thank you

  • A-muse-in-writer
    February 16
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    mmm such a dreamy, lovely write this one is. Loved every word. well done.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    February 15

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    excellent~

    Enjoyed reading this
    Will catch up
    Have been in the hospital for 4 days really sick
    Only good thing was I got 4mg of Morphine every 2 hrs no pain then........got me one dose before I got home just a few hours ago.............so beginning to wear off and I need to lay down soon.......just had 393 e mails
    Best of luck in the contest
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~


  • Just passing by
    February 15
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    Its beautiful.


  • Cannonsfire
    February 15
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    soft and beautiful hon C


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 15
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    Indeed
    short and sweet

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