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hallmark is cheesy, but you make it seem alright.

we hide under the covers
to see if we can trick the sunrise
from shining through our shutters
and slipping into a temporary nightfall.

we weren't ready for the morning
just laying in his arms were good enough.

nobody would of guess
that me and him, him and I
would make a perfect coupling.
but I guessed it
and took a chance on something,

something that just felt right.

you see it isn't always all about the physical,
though physical contact doesn't hurt one bit.
it's all about the emotional connection
the inner, outer, and the upside down
of the workings of your heart.

so as we lay there in the morning sunrise
wrapped in linen sheets.
we kissed the parting clouds
as we cracked the shutters
and bathe in young lovers first kiss.

Author notes

it's about the future.

Any advice would be lovely?

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  • lol ohhhhhhhh b you fooled me with the first stanza... i thought it was gonnna rhyme lmao.... jk

    great write b i get the feeling its gotta great vibe all over

  • Oh my god! This is AMAZING! INCREDIBLE! I'm just about speechless. The imagery and metaphores are to die for. Great job!


  • Mistressofthedark
    February 16
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    Love love love love love!